Some people think to lower the maximum speed on all roads can make road saver ,some think there are another way, discuss in both view and give your opinion.
Nowadays, over speed bacme one one the critical reasons in traffic accident. Some people believed that to lower the maximu speed on all roads could be beneficial for road safety, some others say there are a better way to keep road safe.
To begin, the speed limit should be reduced in certain areas. Esepcially in the CBD and the school zoon. During these areas, there are many predestrians on the street, lower speed can make driver pay more attention on surrounding , they can make a quicker respond
However, if the same top speed limit applied for all roads, it will damage the traffic efficiency significantly. Different speed limit has their capacity design for different types of roads. It keeps the maximum traffic volumn to go through the road.
Besides, there are new technology for the drving assitance to keep road safe, such as auto break, self-drive system. Active safe driving tech has been involed into driver’s behavior more and more.
In conclusion, lower speed limit can maximze the road safty in certain areas, but new tech can offer more possibilty to avoid the accident.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 184.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02717391304 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44354219649 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641304347826 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6015243725 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262004092959 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091266408231 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102957669143 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140715426332 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885435264747 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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