the only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
it it ture that the cities have become more and more people. Many companies, shopping center and schools have mainly located in the central area which only containing few square kilometers. some people believe that to reducing the needs to city's acitvities is the only one way to reduce the traffic issues. While such idea may have some benefits to the city, I believe there are the other ways to make a better environment in the cities. In my opinion, I disagree the former statement.
Firstly, to lower the needs to the cities means that some of the companies and shopping centre have to relocated to the rural areas. These actions will absoulutly damage the efficiency of the local economy . Because most of the headquater companies has been set up in the central of the cities for more than few decades. All the business connection has been tighed together. For example, the amp sydeny office's location is a walking ditance to the pwc sydney office, that truely helpful to their employee to hold the business meeting for each others. If pwc located at rural area, amp empolyees have to cost more time and money on traveling, then it is not only depleteting the efficiency, but also increasing the chance to the traffice congestion.
Secondly, there are more options to reduce the cities congestion. The local council should implement a strict law to the private car which parking in the city everyday. The parking fee should be risen to an unafforddable level to the ordinary people . For instance, the central london coucil has set up the new parking fee which too expensive to park to prevent more vehicles into london in 2000. The local traffic has been improved tremendously. More over, the companies should encourge their employees to take a different time shifts to avoid the congestion in the city.
To sum up, by reducing the needs from home to the cities, it may has a little help for the congestion. I hold that we should think more and make a smart move to improve traffic issues in the cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77936962751 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51212270095 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532951289398 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9619105553 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7894736842 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3684210526 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42105263158 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210306201719 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649665267394 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842085075238 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136601478924 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384738570164 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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