To sum up, parents should send their children to school for the formal education rather than to learn at home. Although schools may not satsify some talented students' needs.
HEMA is the most famous ready food supermarket in China. Many office employees love to order the ready food from their mobile phones and pick them up after long working days. It seems there are many benefits, and the following essay will discuss this trend.
Firstly, the ready food has provided various choices to people which have no time to cook for themselves due to the high pressure competition society. The heavy workload has forced employees away from their kitchens. Since over time working style becomes regular, so cooking at home becomes rare, and they do not have time for shopping and select their favor food materials to enjoy a homemade dinner. Therefore, the eat ready food has provided an efficient and multiple solution to those busy working families.
Secondly, the ready food offer an affordable price for many low income families due to the massive production. Nowadays, the organic food has become the healthy standard to those middle and upon classes. It seems to be no option for the hard-up families, and the hygiene and affordable food was become their targets. Therefore, Food factories start to aim on the potential customers through a large amount ready food supplying.
Nevertheless, eating to much ready food may jeopardize people's health since their packing conditions. Because the ready food has to be stored for a longer term for transportation and selling period, so the chemical substances could be used to keep them in a ready status. To intake those extra elements over the advice standard may lead to a serious consequence, such as cancer.
To sum up, the ready food has provided an efficient and affordable food supply solution to those people who have no time to cook at home. Also, it has benefit the families which may have financial problems. Although it may harm people's health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 413, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... to enjoy a homemade dinner. Therefore, the eat ready food has provided an efficient an...
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Line 4, column 22, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...y food supplying. Nevertheless, eating to much ready food may jeopardize peoples ...
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Line 5, column 208, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...lies which may have financial problems. Although it may harm peoples health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, as for, as to, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00327868852 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49769364187 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55737704918 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9393980431 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7647058824 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0975068759063 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375695641851 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325054028887 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0653468632658 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298836024145 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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