Someone think the best way to keep the road safety is lower the maximum speed on all the roads, someone think there are another better way. Dicuss in both views and give your opinion
Nowadays, people concern abouth the increasing death rate by the vehilce, they believed that the government should lower the top speed stantar on all rodas for the safety reason. Some people say there aer another way to archive the same result.
Obviously, to lower the speed limit will reduce the accident rate according by different reseaches. Especially in some certain areas, such as CBD and School Zone areas during the peak hour. Because there are many pedestrains on the street; slow vehicle can short the breaking distance than the faster one, one second movement by a vehicle can run around 10 meters, that might be cause a death or surviral. Furthermore, driver can pay extra attention and give the proper responding to the sudden situation.
On the other hand, driving assitance technology development has contributed huge effects to the road safety. More and more vehicle supported the auto-brake function which can detect any human being infront of the vehilce and brake the vehicle automatically. Also, the driver can set up the over speed alarming with certain speed limit.
In conclusion, lower speed limit on all roads should be one of the best options to avoid the accident, involving with more new safety vehicle technologies could be make a better effect for the road safty.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: BE_CAUSE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'because'?
Suggestion: because
...le can run around 10 meters, that might be cause a death or surviral. Furthermore, drive...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, second, so, as for, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10280373832 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52251629912 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658878504673 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3980544379 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.2 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.9 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138122893482 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521154045994 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487337063728 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906645561743 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532937284834 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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