It is true that children are not allowed to act alone in some areas of America, especially in deprived communities. In my opinion, curfew is a useful way to protect children, but we cannot ignore the freedom of children.
First of all, one of the main benefits of curfew is safety. There is no doubt that the rate of crime keeps the high level in the economically deprived communities. Some illegal behaviors such as robbery or thief are very common at night. Curfew means that these problems can be avoided. Another benefit of curfew is that stay out all night can be avoided. As teenagers, they cannot fully understand the consequences of their actions and don't know how to protect themselves from possible dangers. So their parents always worry about their kids being out late at night into trouble.
However, there are some arguments that a curfew should not be imposed. One is that we cannot limit a children’s freedom in the name of safety. Local Authorities should build a comfortable and peaceful environment for our children such as installing more cameras or increasing night patrols to deter criminals rather than restrict children’s freedom to protect their safety. Also, in order to raise the safety awareness of the students, safety education should be promoted in the school. Freedom is as important as security, we cannot sacrifice freedom for safety.
As discussed above, although curfew is an effective way to protect the children's safety, it is not worth promoting. We should analyze the root cause of this situation instead of restricting their freedom.
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- In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.What is your opinion on this? 80
- In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.Discuss both views and give your opinion 67
- It is much more convenient to watch a movie on television or computer than buy a ticket and go to the cinema. In the nearest future, the popularity of cinemas will drastically decline. Do you agree or disagree? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 438, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...d the consequences of their actions and dont know how to protect themselves from pos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, no doubt, such as, first of all, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08778625954 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78126971368 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576335877863 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4841422621 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3125 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185842988776 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644570321071 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464566986425 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103864195943 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336000372975 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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