In some area of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
What is your opinion on this?
It is argued that in specific places in us, young people are made to stay inside their homes from a certain time at night as a curfew. I agree that this must be followed compulsory because these places are in danger at night either due to crime reason such as kidnapping or murder or the place is surrounded by wild animals.
There are several reasons for the roaming of young people at night. One of the main reason includes crime being conducted such as kidnapping by using chemicals and no sound could be heard by others or by mudering them with leaving no suspects. those areas are primarily protected by police outside but even though care must be taken as, people cannot leave their own houses and migrate to otthe places. so, a curfew is maintained for protecting people of those places.
The second main reason will be due to animals coming at night attacking the people. so, youngsters must be accompanied by parents compulsory in that time. The old people can easily understand the footsteps of dangered species coming forward. In addition, these places must be taken care by the government in protection of the people from dangers evolving at night. Consequently, the jungle must be covered with heavy grills by sealing the area.
To summarise, in an emergency youngsters are allowed to go with elders to protect from dangers of crime and the wild animals living in that place. Measures must be taken to control peace and allow free movement of people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, second, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1219.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79921259843 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45219973219 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55905511811 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7848615599 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7692307692 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160147641989 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657536582821 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330299797856 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105272665861 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284540637047 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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