During Curfew, in some US localities children between age group of 13 to 19 years are not allowed to go outside without adult company. Though I feel all humans have right to roam around freely with full freedom at anytime and anywhere. But I support that during political emergency situations such as curfew, teenagers should not be left alone outside after certain night hours. This essay will discuss the need to restrict the movement of minors after certain time during curfew.
I believe teens have right to move around safely across any time of a day irrespective of geographic locations. We as humans cannot impose ban on teens who have nothing to with such political emergencies are home prisoned. For example, there are instances where a teen is suppose to get medicine for her mother but he cannot go because his mother cannot accompany due to ill health. For such difficult times, I feel that imposing ban on minors is not advisable at all.
Though some reasons are justifiable, I strongly feel and agree with the fact that teenagers should not be allowed outside after certain time during curfew unless some adults are accompanying them. It is observed that teens are most targeted victim during such difficult situations. Children are humiliated and abused in order to serve the purpose of showing anti support to the government. Instances like minors are kidnapped and abused in US during curfew by government opposing groups so that they can provide strong message to the president. Hence, I feel whatever the situation is imortant we can always stop minors to go out during curfew unless guided by adults.
In US, teenagers should be within during curfew else they should be escort by adults. I feel there might be certain situation where a teen has to go out in curfew but such instance could be avoided by staying at home or ask adults to lead them because nothing is as important as life. In conclusion, I strongly support the descison of keeping teenagers at home during curfew after certain hours if not guided by adults.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88252148997 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48452654321 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515759312321 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0142270192 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8125 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226668014359 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788523819546 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698039494648 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150934786361 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695890149945 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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