Safety is an important part for every individual. Recently, due to some unexpected and uncontrolled circumtances, a 'curfew' was imposed in certain areas of the United States. And safety rules was applied for teenagers, by which means they can not go outside of their respective shelters at night until an adult person is coming along. Is it required to apply such rules? This essay will discuss the importance of the rules applied for human safety like the one above.
Appling such rules restrict the freedom for the targeted group of people. It keeps them bounded with in time and place forcefully because they can not move out of home for any important work after a particular time. For instance a school going pupil may have some private classes to attend or someone wants to join music school post evening. If they have nobody near him to drop him to the venue, then they will miss out the class or event unnecessarily.
However, life safety concers should be the highest priority for all. Moving around outside could be dangerous at night; specially when 'curfew' type of rules are circulated in the locality. Goverment applies this temporary rules to keep people safe, while keeping them away from risk prone areas. Consider the case metinoed above, the classes a student is compromising can be cop up later with some extra classes and effort. But due to few classes or an event we can not risk a teenager's life.
In conclusion, I believe the rules which is applied in an uncontrolled event are for our safety. We should respect and follow the rules imposed even though it may not be comfortable for all.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 432, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
... some extra classes and effort. But due to few classes or an event we can not risk...
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Line 5, column 477, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'teenagers'' or 'teenager's'?
Suggestion: teenagers'; teenager's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80286738351 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47419331473 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605734767025 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8114285539 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.75 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170932187963 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542801850961 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417717325025 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10124861158 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264495350975 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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