In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is impos,d, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
_ What is your opinion about this?
In these days world is facing pandemic problem of COVID-19 due to which many countries has imposed curfew in those area which are much effected due to the virus. US has announced night curfew in few areas where teenagers and children are restrict to go outside of their homes after particular time without their parents or guardians. I strongly agree with this notion as it will help to stop spread of virus caused by night parties. However, Different people have distinct mindsets. This essay evaluates both approaches before making a final note as well my opinion too.
To commence with the first idea, there are a myriad of things to be shared in its favor. first and Foremost, teenagers do night parties with their friends or in large groups. As a result, this would lead to spread virus in non effect people. Secondly, young children can give much attention to towards precautions such as avoid masks and use of sanitizers when they in crowdy area. This would also endanger their life as well others who will get in touch with them later.
Shifting toward another thought of school, some people say that curfew may restrict their freedom as they think virus can spread in day also then curfew in night is baseless. Moreover, if teenagers would go outside with their guardians then it could be possible that they may affect by virus also. Therefore all these reason provided by the public that curfew is nothing just a attack on the freedom of teenagers.
Having discussed the arguments and counter arguments, I would like to infer that curfew helps to slow down the speed infection spread and adult are more aware about the disease and they can poke teenagers to follow the guidelines issues by the government. To justify my state of mind, according to the survey, WHO has announced that the counties those took lockdown steps earlier are successful to slow down the number of infected cases. Hammering the last nail, I personally feel that government is doing lot of steps in favor of their residents and people should also support the government to win this situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this area' or 'those areas'?
Suggestion: this area; those areas
...ch many countries has imposed curfew in those area which are much effected due to the viru...
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Line 1, column 237, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'restricted'.
Suggestion: restricted
... areas where teenagers and children are restrict to go outside of their homes after part...
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Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...ommence with the first idea there are a myriad of things to be shared in its favor fir...
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Line 5, column 274, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...then it could be possible that they may affect by virus also Therefore all these reason p...
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Line 5, column 373, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... the public that curfew is nothing just a attack on the freedom of teenagers H...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7619047619 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28418276807 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557422969188 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 357.0 20.2975951904 1759% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1700.0 106.682146367 1594% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 357.0 20.7667163134 1719% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 106.0 7.06120827912 1501% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208713352067 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.208713352067 0.084324248473 248% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123080426427 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520151011722 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 179.5 13.0946893788 1371% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -273.96 50.2224549098 -545% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 140.2 11.3001002004 1241% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.81 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 24.62 8.58950901804 287% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 9.78957915832 541% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 144.8 10.1190380762 1431% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 25.0 10.7795591182 232% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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