In some areas of the US, a ‘curfew’ is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
What is your opinion of this?
In America, some areas are restricted for youngsters at night times unless they are with someone over 18 years old. In my opinion, it is dangerous to be outside alone at midnight, so to have somebody with you is necessary to avoid any problems and also parents need to raise their children an awareness of dangers outside.
Big countries, like USA, can be quite dangerous at night times, especially when there is an easy target like a lonely adolescent walking in the streets. There are numerous people disappearing every year unknowingly and this is exactly why an adult is needed to be along with the youth. In particular areas, people have to be especially aware of the gangsters who are looking for kidnap or kill people. For example, in Detroit the violent crime is huge, my friend, who lived there heard everyday gunshots and did never go out when it turned dark outside. Also, she mentioned that a lot of young girls are missing.
To prevent these crimes happening, it is a vital task for parents to raise children awareness about the crime. In one hand, adolescents need to know about the dangers outside and how to prevent them. On the other hand, youngsters are the participants by themselves in crimes, simply because of being bored, curious and have a need for adrenaline. To help this situation, an educative lesson is important. For instance, it depends on a criminal level, but rehabilitation is an option where an educative lesson is taking part with real examples of the most awful murders and raping scenes to make the youngsters deeply think about the consequences they can cause to people.
In conclusion, crime rates are high in the USA and due to that, it is vital to educate youth about the dangers around and how to keep away from them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 662, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'peopling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: peopling
...k about the consequences they can cause to people. In conclusion, crime rates are hig...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7654723127 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58599100306 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583061889251 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5698618514 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.538461538 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46153846154 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149582943172 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524922922905 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531301282281 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866915888063 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644262484615 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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