In some areas of US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a perticular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
What is your opinion about this?
In last couple of decades, crime rates have been increasing significantly in the US. Looking at the statistics, teenagers are found either a victim or a culprit in the crimes which have been occurring at nights. As a result, government have imposed curfew for teenagers in some areas of US at night, where they are allowed to go out only if adult is accompanying them. This essay is in support of this idea and will try to prove this opinion with examples and reasons.
Considering the increasing crime rate at night, decision of a imposing curfew will be proven to vital for the safety of our future adults. Teenagers are the most susceptible to any crime and some people take an advantage of this. Moreover, there are hardly any requirement where teenager have any need to get out of the home late night. Therefore, it will definitely diminish the crime rate if they are not exposed to this crime world at night.
In this tender age, they might persuaded for crime as they can't distinguish the difference between what is good and what is really harmful for them. Consequently, they might lead to the way which takes them to the journey of crime. Although some people argue that this rule can hinder the freedom of the adolescents, I believe freedom can't be given at the cost of their valuable lives. In addition, in case of any urgent need, allowing to go out with adults will make sure that they will be supervised and hence not the easy target for any crime.
In a nutshell, imposing a curfew at night for adolescents will be proven a good decision for our societies. Unless there is a need, in which they can be accompanied by adults, there are no more crucial reason to stop this law at the cost of crime and lives of our young generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... they might persuaded for crime as they cant distinguish the difference between what...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...m of the adolescents, I believe freedom cant be given at the cost of their valuable ...
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Line 5, column 437, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'going', 'gonna'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: going; gonna
...n, in case of any urgent need, allowing to go out with adults will make sure that the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, if, look, moreover, really, so, therefore, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59554140127 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52104815514 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512738853503 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7387433686 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.071428571 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327292221539 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120688980107 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704537076448 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21612169059 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498658874703 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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