Some children have friends that can influence them. What do you think parents should do about it? Give your own opinion and examples.
In the past, children used to be very active and took care of their health, but nowadays, obesity among young ones is becoming increasingly common. This essay will discuss causes of obesity including poor diet and lack of exercise. This essay will also suggest solutions to these problems including eating healthy and active lifestyle.
Parents these days are giving poor diet to their offspring than ever before. In addition, lack of interest in sports and increase use of digital devices is becoming the most common cause of obesity. Parents are ignorant of the fact that their children are suffering from many diseases through their everyday diet. Parents are to busy to monitor what their children are eating, playing and are only focus on proving them lavish lifestyle. For instance, some parents work full time and due to their busy schedule, they provide fast food for their offspring and allow them to play games on mobiles or play station. This often result causing obesity in children because fast food contains so much fat and these children lose interest in physical activities and spend most time in playing games or watching TV.
Maintaining a good active life style and improving one’s diet are both critical to mitigating obesity related illnesses. People need to realize that if they only providing fast food and not involving their children in physical activities they will suffer physically or mentally. According to a recent study, most children who suffer obesity are either not monitored by their parents while growing up or they have no interest in exercise. Therefore, in order to fight against obesity, parents should monitor their child diet and involve them in different sports.
In conclusion, in today’s fast paced world more and more children are becoming ill as a result of obesity. This essay discussed how obesity is often caused by poor diet and lack of exercise. This essay also suggested that the solutions to this problem are twofold: to manage a better active lifestyle and to eat healthier diet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 472, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...estyle. For instance, some parents work full time and due to their busy schedule, they pr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11904761905 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4409624951 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526785714286 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9743549583 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.099458562875 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382001112113 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388237277751 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0569322261745 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431824818015 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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