Write a letter to the TV Channel. In you letter;
1) Say why and when you bought the item
2) Say what is the difference / what is wrong with it
3) Say what action you would like them to take
Dear Sir,
I am writing to complain about the remote I bought from you’re your online store on 1st April 2019. I have been a very loyal customer of yours for the last five years and have successfully made numerous purchases over the years. Unfortunately, this time I am dissatisfied with the service you have provided.
The remote I ordered was the new Samsung universal model – 1985. My reason for choosing this remote was that it was compatible with all Samsung TV’s and also DVD players as mentioned on your website. However, the remote is unable to get connected to my DVD player but working fine on TV. I tried all possible techniques including changing batteries to try and make it work but after all efforts made, I gave up and realized that this remote is not what it offers online.
For this reason, I would ask you either to refund the purchase in full price or send me a replacement remote.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
Hasan Bilal
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-04-17 | Hasan.Bilal | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 359, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...hniques including changing batteries to try and make it work but after all efforts made...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, so, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74285714286 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56547883107 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4820188391 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124594327099 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487848656964 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417845789452 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825498734892 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212462272119 0.0580467560999 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.