Some cities have vehicle-free days when private cars, trucks and motorcycles are banned from the city center. People are encouraged to use public transportation such as buses, taxis and metro on vehicle-free days. To what extent do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays goverment has introduced vehicle-free days to lead people to use public transportation services. In my opinion, it is a effective policy provided that there is edequient infrastructure inplace to allow the city population to move around the city. In this essay, both the sides will be discussed and concluded.
Mostly people prefer using personal motor vehicle to travel as it is quite convenient as compared to common transportation. Owned motor-vehicles give the freedom to move around as per the wish of the owner and could save time while commuting via common mode would be inconvienent and time consuming.
Moreover, to support such policies, the city should have supporting infrastructure to manage the transit of the areas population, if not this could result in huge que of commuters, crowded buses and metro. Subsiquently leaving the commuters frustated.
On the other hand, travelling by public transportation will result in fewer motor vehicles on street, which means less fossil powered motors emmiting poisionous gase in the enviroment, in return this will help in conserving environment. And a clean environment will lead to better health of citizens.
Also by adhering to the vehicle-free day, people will face mininal traffic conjunction as there are no private vehicles on the road. Eventually this might motivated citizens to use city buses, shared taxi and metro services.
only then such law will be benificial to the city as well as the residents of it.
To summarise, In my view, the merits of vehivle-free day can overshadow the demerits only if, the city has significant transportation sytem in place to transport a huge numbers of commuters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, then, well, while, as well as, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31343283582 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10371510441 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619402985075 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1240257283 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.538461538 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292904084495 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958617820898 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892869610784 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134942135346 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775953658283 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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