Few people argue that it can be uneconomical and studies can be completed in one's home country, but I do not agree with this notion and I feel a student as an immigrant is out of his comfort zone and can strive harder when compared to studying in one's native. Many students relocate after graduation or after they finish school, mostly to far away continents, believing they can fetch better opportunities.
Moving away for school is not a new trend; since ancient times, people have believed that good teaching and learning may increase the flow of knowledge since foreign education is very different from what we can learn at home. Especially in continents like North America and Europe, we have seen a significant flood of immigrants who move for studies and the majority of them with a desire to settle there itself. In today's culture, we have observed that this trend has expanded dramatically. I totally concur that there are more advantages to studying abroad than to staying in our country which are; First off, by moving, students can encounter new cultures and learn about different lifestyles, which can help them better their lifestyle by assimilating to the cultures they prefer. Second, they may be able to earn more money from part-time work than they might from a full-time position in their hometown. In addition, Asians make up a sizable portion of immigration students. This is mostly owing to the high population density of Asian countries, which results in a lack of available space and a fast-paced lifestyle that eventually leads to a saturation of chances.
To sum up, studying at home can be more affordable and less stressful because we are surrounded by family and friends, but ambitious students are always advised to leave their comfort zone and immerse themselves in a new culture in order to adapt to a better lifestyle that could later benefit future generations as well as the economy of the nation they choose to study in.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, well, i feel, in addition, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90662650602 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68017965255 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599397590361 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.2669162402 49.4020404114 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.9 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.7 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145598102951 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470469548652 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458635202064 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101570521929 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0109813074851 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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