Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime. Many people thing that having more police on streets is the only way to reduce crime.
To what extent do you agree?
There are many countries that are facing the high degree of crime. It can be reduced if there are more police officers patrolling the different areas. It can help in controlling criminal activities. However, changing the mentality of people and making changes in the legal system is also very important.
Crime rate is increasing rapidly because of the growing aggression and immoral behavior of people. Moreover, due to the excessive intolerance, people are too eager to harm each other and tend to do crimes like murder, harassment, vandalism etc. Hence it is very important to change the thinking of humans. there are numerous people in police department who don't understand their responsibility and involve in corruption with bad people. This encourages criminals to do wicked activities without fear. So it is very important to have the tight scrutiny of every officer in police department and there should be strict actions if any police officer is found guilty.
Furthermore, having stringent civil laws can also be a deterrent to crime. If there is strict punishment for crimes like robbery, kidnapping, murder etc. then criminals will be more scared of doing such crimes. Also there should be a ban on the use of liquor and drugs, that is one of the factors to instigate the atrocious mind of people.
To conclude, increasing the number of police officers in the roads is not a reliable solution to reduce crime. There should be a change in the legal system and tougher laws should be made by the government, that can help in minimizing the criminal acts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00763358779 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71103084575 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549618320611 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0637254688 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5625 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218987886838 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742046435467 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610850389086 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133922647994 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329293582262 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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