In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and health and fitness are decreasing.What are the causes and what measures are to be taken to control it? (56)
Obesity is one of the alarming issues in the current era of life. The biggest problem in a few countries was found to be the growing average weight of the population along with declining levels of well-being and fitness. This essay will discuss the possible causes to the over-weight and relevant solutions to solve it.
The factors contributing to the increase in the number of kilograms weighed on an average in most of the people are eating unhealthy and leading a sedentary lifestyle. Because youth prefer to eat junk food with more carbohydrates and less vitamin and fiber sources, leading to gain in weight. For instance, although most women love to cook, after a hectic workday they are opting for online food ordering services which have become a major driving force to eat junk. While many organizations have a typical environment to work with computers, forcing the employees to remain seated. For example, in modern life people are running behind the competition in the office and getting stuck without any physical activity. Although the lack of exercise and consuming carb-rich food is considered to be the important factors for obesity, many people are still ignorant.
What steps need to be implemented to avoid these problems? The organizations should focus on the health and wellbeing of their employees. They have asked the workers to use bicycles as a means of transport so that the employees will indulge in physical activity and improve their health by decreasing body weight. Not only conducting awareness camps to the people about health and fitness issues but also conducting frequent health checkups in the organizations would help solve the problem of overweight.
Hence, having healthy food and doing exercise would help to overcome
the problems of weight gain and stay healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18644067797 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68663261893 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596610169492 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8199131077 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.285714286 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184685875004 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562565216823 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438426942928 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0832127406898 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566531781269 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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