In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreaseing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Food is essential for all the human beings for their growth as well as physical fitness. However, nowadays way of food habit as well as way of living have dramatically changed among the people. In current era junk food are more popular among all kind of people which increase health problems. To overcome this humans have to take some measures such as join the fitness class and do exercises regularly.
Firstly, some countries are more technologically sounds as result day to day life style of people may changed. In addition, nowadays all kinds of people are more attracted to fast food which may cause health hazards. To illustrate, this in urban countries people have less physical work and they eat most of the food which prepared by bread. Furthermore, due to the junk food living beings may have disease such as over weight, heart problem and so on.
To highlight the measures that should be taken by all individuals to reduce the health issues which is the result of unhealthy food. For an example, in the present time people visit different kind of health center to obtain solution of their disease. Although, they have to do regular exercise and yoga which may lead the level of fitness for individuals. Moreover, labour work or physical workout is play essential role to digest food properly.
In conclusion, modern food style of human beings invite a lot of fitness problems including over weight. However, some expert provide solution to this, using fitness class which advise you to variety of exercise.
I recommended that if people eat extremely unhealthy food they must have to do some workout to digest them.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-03-31 | khushbu1407 | 56 | view |
- Every year several languages die out Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 63
- some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary School Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantage 82
- Today more people are travelling than ever before Why is this the case What are the benefits of travelling for the Traveller 73
- Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities Others however say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required Discuss both these views and give your 56
- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreaseing What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 176, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... way of living have dramatically changed among the people. In current era junk fo...
^^
Line 1, column 307, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...h increase health problems. To overcome this humans have to take some measures such...
^^^^
Line 1, column 336, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o overcome this humans have to take some measures such as join the fitness class ...
^^
Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...work and they eat most of the food which prepared by bread. Furthermore, due to t...
^^
Line 7, column 92, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vite a lot of fitness problems including over weight. However, some expert provid...
^^
Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r, some expert provide solution to this, using fitness class which advise you to ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93115942029 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50003938217 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525362318841 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 11.1347304513 49.4020404114 23% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.7333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215335699367 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077188838179 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03655220224 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130322767913 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0124894139736 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.