Some countries encourage teenagers to have part time job and see it as a good thing while others disagree. Give your opinion and discuss both the views
A couple of nations persuade youngsters to get a part-time work and tend to believe for its positive, while others negates the thought. In this essay ill give insights to both views and eventually stand my ground why being a young working person is not a good practice.
Doing some extra activity to earn money is very common throughout any nations, this is usually being done by college students. An example of this are people who lived in puberty, their family already struggles to have a food in their plate and education becomes a necessity to them. In effect, teenagers are force to work to cater not only to sustain their school but also to provide the things hes family needs. With this in mind, doing part-time task is beneficial to people particularly to those in need.
On the other hand, a people rejects the idea of a sideline job, cause of its negative impact to the juvenile people in terms of their study. This primarily revolves to the fact that education wants a lot of time and focus to absorb all information presented by any topic in the class. This knowledge given to the young ones treats as a pillar of what they will become in the near future. According to Eastern Samar State University Research 70% of student who
undergo work while they are studying cant focus everyday during class, which leads up to having low grades or even worst, failing it. Thus, there is a significant point to consider that teens who is studying should stay focus on the course they are pursuing.
To conclude, I believe that students should primarily focus on their studies since this is what molds them in the future, but, sometimes the world is cruel and people needed to work to cater their demand, thus, thorough support should be given from both family and the government to ensure the children dreams.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ns around the world support the idea of part time jobs for the teenagers as it is conside...
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...my opinion, youngsters should take up a part time job because it helps them to learn diff...
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Suggestion: part-time
...ome countries around the world consider part time job as an important way of learning whe...
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Suggestion: Part-time
...ys and gains a sense of responsibility. Part time jobs help a teenager to feel independen...
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...er hand, some countries do not consider part time jobs good for the teenagers because the...
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...ars that countries which do not promote part time jobs have much less school or college d...
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...eas but it is my strong conviction that part time job is necessary for the overall develo...
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...d nations should promote the concept of part time jobs in order to have more efficient an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91304347826 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69009478567 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547101449275 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.7554391498 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.666666667 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6666666667 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1111111111 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313783879616 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130690442697 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736566086985 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201604808797 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344521634048 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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