In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
There are some countries are being addicted from eating fast meals, which it causes health problems to human. So government should take an immediate to reduce from this passive habit, by increasing taxes on fast food companies. Therefore, I agree with this point, and I will explain in details as following;
Nowadays, fast food restaurants has dominant impact around the world, hence people stop cooking due to spending many hours at work, as they do not have time to cook at home, so they prefer to eat ready meals from restaurants. Notably, they extremely know about the consequences which it may happen to them. For example, pizza hut company introduces a different kind of ready meals which it contains on high cholaries, which it will lead to obesity, and increasing from the proportion of cholestrol in blood. As we found a recent studies from health community in UK that there are enormous number of people have been addicted on eating this unhealthy food, as it showed those kind of people had a digestive problems in their stomach, therefore, the percentage of acid was increased for them.
So, government has vitale role by increasing levies on fast food companies to reduce from this effectiveness. I tend to believe that decision is right to be taken against them to secure Hyman's health from being destroyed.
In brief, fast food should think by including a healthy food added to their menu, as result of avoiding loss of profits and it's customers alike. However, it should not have looked to their advantages only, as they have to work to reach customer's satisfaction, in this case, each customer will be satisfied with their service, and what kind of food they present to customers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, for example, in brief, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9375 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6143596813 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586805555556 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.4623436732 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.2 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331657115599 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132886040376 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796164565872 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201793874894 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687122056761 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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