In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In recent years, fast food has become one of the most affected aspects of our society due to the health issues because of fatty foods. Every day the number is increasing and most of the consumers are young people, our next generation will be suffering from diseases. This essay will discuss whether the government should impose higher tax on junk food providers.
Firstly, the consumption of fast food has led society to the serious health problems. One of the most important issues is the obesity. Our hectic lifestyle and long working hours have made our excessive consumption of junk food because we do not have time or energy to prepare and cook our lunch or dinner, or even the breakfast. Additionally, Fast food restaurants are convenient, affordable and accessible all over the roads. Some of the fast food restaurants are serving customers 24/7 and are accessible with nominal prices. Many of them are actually aware of consequences of fast food but they subsist in eating it.
Secondly, most of the fast food consumers are young people. They deny believing that kind of food will damage their health. Therefore, imposing a higher tax on fast food restaurants will increase the price of that kind of food but that is not enough. The government should encourage healthy restaurant, for example, provide to government employee’s meal vouchers. In order to maintain the quality, the government should release food health categories and post it in front in the restaurant. The government is affected economically by those people who suffered from the heart disease, cholesterol and diabetes caused by junk food.
In conclusion, we should take action about unhealthy food and we have to start (with/from) ourselves and our families by encouraging our children and create awareness about the benefits of healthy food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, kind of, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1610738255 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76153089436 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543624161074 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4811704271 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.125 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312081296821 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112794732754 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618503310848 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189818640228 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817811569413 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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