In some countries levels of health and fitness are decreasing and average weights are increasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what are some possible solutions?
There is a growing trend, mostly in the developed world, of rising obesity and dipping health levels. The essay will shed light on the reasons behind and put forth potential steps to curb this public health disaster.
A sedentary lifestyle and a diet full of processed food are two major causes of the aforementioned problem. These days’ people prefer to spend their free time binge watching TV series on Netflix instead of performing some kind of exercises. In a recent study, it has been observed that people spend 10 hours a week watching shows on the internet. Such a life provides no time for fitness and health related activities. The second reason contributing to increase in obesity is high sugar content in most of the processed foods. The sugar content in these foods is considerably higher than the natural food. Processed food is easy to buy and takes less time to cook. The current work-life balance forces an individual to follow bad dietary habits.
However, not all is lost in this battle against unhealthy lifestyle. In order to tackle the problems, the government has to step in. The government should create targeted awareness campaigns focusing on the regions most affected by the trend. These campaigns should motivate the masses to adopt a healthy lifestyle and make them aware of the hazardous diseases caused by obesity. For instance, organized marathons in many cosmopolitan cities have encouraged the citizens to leave their couches and get fitter. Additionally, the government should also increase the taxes on processed foods. This will deter the people from making unhealthy dietary choices in favor of home-cooked food leading to an overall healthy life.
In conclusion, the upward trend in average weights poses a major risk to the society. Although, an individual is responsible for his or her health, the government can pitch in and provide an impetus toward the goal of a fitter society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1356466877 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6786179791 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611987381703 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.848193324 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.6842105263 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6842105263 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15789473684 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0904939110968 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0243267811133 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293159433846 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0508513838519 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225338702762 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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