In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, many people prefer to live an independent life, away from their families. social unrest and communication gap between families are the factors that corroborates that this is definitely a negative trend, even though it's aim is to achieve greater good for the individual, living alone. This essay will discuss the possible reasons along with my perspective for this emerging change.
Without any qualms, there are compelling reasons why more and more people are choosing their aloof life. Individuals, opting to live alone are the ones, who find an intrinsic value in doing that. In other words, these people want to explore the other side of their lives and believe that moving away from their relationships is the first step towards such exploration. What's more, these people claim that living a self dependent life will make them critical thinker, who can take tough decisions about their life at the correct time. For instance, many Indian students prefer to pursue their masters from USA and the UK. This bold step of moving far away from the families makes them self reliant and according to the articles published in toi, more than 90% of such population gets coveted roles further in their life.
There is a point worth noting that despite making a person an independent sole, living alone also makes them socially unaware. In other words, these people run away from their family responsibilities, thus, giving no option to the family but to sustain on their own. In addition, such a trend also make people an anti social animal, as they are living on their own, this further deepens the communication gap between families.
On the balance of the evidence, while it may seem reasonable to live an independent life, I believe that it's disadvantages certainly eclipse it's merits. I believe that if a person wants to live an independent life, then he/she should understand their family duties. This will place them better : socially, ethically and at par with their passion
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, then, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04545454545 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54386764284 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560606060606 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4630223479 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173886381223 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679105291805 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344788581163 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110782873261 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451158708971 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.