In modern society, people is changing in the way the used to live in the past. Nowadays, society tend to live a life lonely than sharing with someone else. I believe that this will cause some negative effects in the future if this still continue.
In the modern era, society is facing new changes in the form of living, the reason is simple "Education". Educación have been transforming by the time and this is a significant factor why people is changing. For instance, in the past, families used to be structured by more than 6 individuals and now families are disappearing because men and women have not been in the same tone.
Second, technologies such as, social media, computers and cellphones have been involved in the way people interact. As a result of this, these devices have been educating the modern human beings leading to each one of them to create a new mental map in how people should live and how they should interact. On the other hand, this type of thoughts were promoted by parents in the past.
To sum up, people is facing these problems and it will depends on each one how to live. I am convinced that in a near future people around the world will noticed this problem and they will up to decide to change like when they were younger.
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- Some people feel that entertainer (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid to much money. Do you agree or disagree? which other types of job should be highly paid? 56
- One of your pen friends wants to improve their English at a language school. they have never studied at a language school before and have asked for your advice on how to choose a good one. write a letter to your pen friend. advise them about the following 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 91, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ers and cellphones have been involved in the way people interact. As a result of ...
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Line 6, column 56, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'depend'
Suggestion: depend
...le is facing these problems and it will depends on each one how to live. I am convinced...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, still, for instance, such as, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61674008811 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64287810409 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57268722467 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0465135076 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2727272727 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193486937378 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077722347648 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426677453109 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123351777648 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607650011385 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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