In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might the be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
It is often argued that a place to stay is necessary to live our life very safely. Some people might think that having own house is more significant than renting a place such as apartment or condo for inhabitants among few nations. This essay will address the perspective of the shelter and show that it has positive or negative development.
First of all, the majority of individuals might save money very well when they own a home. In other words, the number of inhabitants who does not have their own home must pay the monthly rate because renting one means the residents borrow a place to stay in a period of time, so it is compulsory to pay the fees every single month to a lender such as landlord. However, when people have their own, they are ensured that they do not have to pay the rent permanently until selling it. Thus, individuals' budget may be protected safely.
Moreover, when this circumstance continues, it could be a positive situation. The people's lifestyle would be improved by well-controlled economy due to lots of money saving. For example, the quality of life might grow up which means they are able to enjoy their lifestyle appropriately because they have a sufficient cash to spend from their home that makes individuals save money whereas, renting condos waste it periodically, so the happiness index also increases. Therefore, this situation expresses very positive phenomenon in the point of view of economic aspect.
In conclusion, in spite of the fact that borrowing place is fairly easier than owning home, we need to encourage residents to have their shelter. It shows more advantages such as a part of economy or lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...e residents borrow a place to stay in a period of time, so it is compulsory to pay the fees ev...
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Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
..., it could be a positive situation. The peoples lifestyle would be improved by well-con...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in other words, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89752650177 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7282493067 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579505300353 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.3360245764 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.615384615 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9230769231 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280348271016 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932622514304 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563873571935 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162310982447 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629135054888 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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