In modern life, the human races face competition about owning home living. The argument emerges to the public whether we must own or rent the house in some countries. This essay will explain the reason why we should take an opportunity to have our own home living rather than rent it.
To begin with, home living is part of basic needs. People who want to live permanently in one country should consider having their home living. the price of the home living in some countries always increase significantly and more than half of the expenditure of money will be used to pay for home living. Therefore, owning a house will be affordable compared to just rent for it. In addition, if people do not have an idea to have a home living as soon as possible and the area where they live is denser by the increase of the human population, they will face a big problem because they will always pay for the rent to the landlord for the rest of their life.
On the other hand, the trend of owning a house leads to some positive values. Firstly, owning a house is part of the investment. We know that the price of the property in all areas in the world always increases because the demand for this also goes up. For instance, in Jakarta, this city is the capital of Indonesia so that there are many people who take migration to this city. Furthermore, the more people go to this area, the more people need home living so that the price of owning a house in this city skyrockets. Then, when people have this asset at an early time, they would take more advantage to sell their property at a significant price. Secondly, renting a house will just give some advantages to landlords. We have to pay not only renting but also other services such as electricity, water consumption, renovation.
In conclusion, owning a house will also be the first choice to live in all countries because this option will bring us to live permanently in an area. Even though we do not need it, it can be our investment because the price never declines.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52316076294 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42136078865 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468664850136 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6058483144 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2222222222 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3888888889 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.22222222222 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281690261843 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990284663016 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486614201905 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181437130779 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443422324757 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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