In some countries people of all ages place extra emphasis on sports and exercising. Do you think it is a positive development? Give your opinion and relevant examples from your own experience.
Nowadays, children and adults dedicate part of their free time to a variety of sport activities. Children do exercises during physical training lessons, stay extra time after school to play football or basketball. And, also, many adult people try to spare time for visiting modern sport facilities. I totally support this tendency and I think we need to encourage more people to find time for sport.
To begin with, attending sport facilities is time consuming and expensive today. It is very difficult to find free time for exercising. Family people need to earn money to maintain their children and themselves. To find time among the daily routine seems impossible for an adult. Moreover, most sport complexes are filled with modern and costly equipment, which make sport more comfortable but not cheap for low and middle classes.
On the other side of the coin, sport exercises have more benefits that disadvantages. The matter is that sport prevents people from different diseases. The reason for this is that our body needs equal amounts of mental and physical activities. When people sitting in their offices they load their brain with work tasks and bodies are almost unmoved. To compensate this, sport activity after work is a very good choice. Active movements are the best possibility to avoid digestion illnesses, hypertension or cardiovascular related problems. The doctors say that sometimes hyperactivity helps to overcome some type of cancer. To give a clear example, the famous American showwoman, Sharon Osbourne, had a brain tumor more than 10 years ago. Besides the chemotherapy, doctors compelled her to increase her activity during the day and she started her day from 5 lapses on a stadium. As a result, her blood pressure was controlled by sport exercises, which is very important factor in rehabilitation, and it helped to overcome this horrible disease. Now she feels good and spends more time in a swimming pool and stadium.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that sport is indispensable part of our life and we can’t ignore it. People shouldn’t be lackadaisical in relation to their own health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...isical in relation to their own health.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'as a result', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.279187817259 0.247107183377 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.154822335025 0.155533422707 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0989847715736 0.0946595960268 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0355329949239 0.0501214627716 71% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0609137055838 0.0437548338989 139% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0964467005076 0.122226691241 79% => OK
Participles: 0.0203045685279 0.0403226058552 50% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.82376450189 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0431472081218 0.0326793684256 132% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0583756345178 0.0861772015684 68% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00253807106599 0.021408717616 12% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00761421319797 0.011925033212 64% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2139.0 1933.35771543 111% => OK
No of words: 346.0 316.048096192 109% => OK
Chars per words: 6.18208092486 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20517956788 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.364161849711 0.374742101984 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.271676300578 0.28420135186 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.222543352601 0.203846283523 109% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.132947976879 0.137316102897 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82376450189 2.80594681477 101% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.037074148 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604046242775 0.56093040696 108% => OK
Word variations: 70.6880062339 60.7387585426 116% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0891783567 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.7272727273 20.7743622355 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.290552697 49.517814964 57% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2272727273 127.492653851 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 20.7743622355 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.454545454545 0.814263465372 56% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 42.8949027851 49.1944974215 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.57575757576 1.69124875643 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189044084948 0.332605444948 57% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0796877107403 0.102741220458 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0491866580151 0.0668466124924 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.441742873785 0.534860350844 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.12101659004 0.148594505496 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069327173241 0.134430193775 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349390251731 0.0742795772207 47% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.340147442986 0.324371583561 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.111330175814 0.0638462369009 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134024754339 0.228012699653 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209630740555 0.058150111329 36% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41683366733 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 1.9629258517 306% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 10.4468937876 172% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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