Some countries spend a lot of money to make bicycle usage easier. Why is this?
Is this the best solution to traffic congestion?
Nowadays, in modern society the biggest problem is on transportation. People use more private cars and step by step cities are becoming to huge parking. Government be thinking that put big budget on bicycle usage to solve this issue, while in some individual’s opinion it is not only alternative for solving traffic congestion. This essay will shed some light on this argument from both sides and extend my partial support to the latter view before arriving at conclusion.
Some people believe that, use more bicycle than cars is not the best answer for traffic question. The perfect public transport like wide underground train, easy access buses or even monorail on the crowded cities could solve these problems better and easier. Moreover, administration should improve culture of using public transport vehicle and encourage citizens that use less private cars. It is obvious that how many number of one passenger cars are diminishing in cities, the traffic will be decreasing too. Furthermore, high prices of fuel may be the correct solution for reducing traffic. Because of high price of fuel, people do not use their car for short distance. As exemplify, when they want to go to work or shop the do not use their car, hence it helps to have not crowded streets.
On the other hand, some persons think that, by using bicycle may solve traffic subject, and also it helps to have a fresh air on big cities. Additionally, the second positive point is about healthy. On the other word, cycling is a best mode to exercise, and helps to live healthier thus by riding bicycle in streets not only traffic will be less, but also people do sport.
At the conclusion, in my opinion, promotion of using bicycle instead of car is a good idea, but it is not the best solution for traffic jam. Government should draw a suitable financial plan that resolve this problem basically.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 416, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun number seems to be countable; consider using: 'many numbers'.
Suggestion: many numbers
...ss private cars. It is obvious that how many number of one passenger cars are diminishing i...
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Line 4, column 726, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...y, when they want to go to work or shop the do not use their car, hence it helps to ha...
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Line 7, column 230, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... healthy. On the other word, cycling is a best mode to exercise, and helps to liv...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, second, so, thus, while, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.934169279 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60439128053 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576802507837 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1978977061 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.375 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200128431604 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618145973228 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060382278562 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135143859329 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424223799765 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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