In some countries, there are many social problems involving teenagers. Some people say this is because parents spend much of their time at work not at home.
Do you agree or disagree?
The role of teenagers, in many community issues, is burgeoning at a staggering rate. While some would argue that both parents work hard to make both ends meet, and neglect their domestic duties; however, in my opinion, I completely agree with the statement because juveniles are involved in drug addiction and are responsible for violent behavior in society.
To embark with, nowadays people have an extremely tight schedule so that their offspring usually suffer due to their lack of attention. Youngsters often get surrounded by a bad acquaintance, so they tend to adopt bad habits from their friends such as drug abuse. Therefore, due to parent's late-sitting young people visit clubs, bars, and, other liquor selling places at night to fulfill their appetite for drugs. For example, a recent report in the Daily times revealed that in the United Kingdom, 45% of the total turnout in bars consist of young people who were unattended by the parents.
What is more, after coming back from school, many teenagers spend time playing many violent games on their electronic gadgets in their parent's absence. Young masses learn aggressive behavior from video games which is often reflected by their actions in the society such as bullying other classmates, quarreling with friends and abusing their parents. For example, in 2019 a sixteen-year-old boy killed his friend after getting defeated by his friend while playing a game called PUBG that has many levels in which a player has to kill their opponents.
To conclude, this essay argued that youngsters are being responsible for raising many social problems because of busy work life they are unable to put sufficient attention to children which leads to narcotics abuse and unlawful behavior.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, such as, in my opinion, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21908127208 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59590603931 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628975265018 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.9593240138 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.7 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244063246649 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884509853331 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499081220641 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138151518382 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426700706499 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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