Some people opt to look after their parents at household as the best choice. Others think the opposite that the elderly should be sent to a special home where has the professional care of nurse and doctor. In my perspective, both views have their good and bad.
On one hand, when old parents are taken care at their own home, they would feel more pleasant and cosier due to the presence of their offspring compared to stay at a strange environment. Indeed, hearing the children sobbing or laughing, witnessing the children growing gradually is the most estatic thing to the elderly and no one even the parents can abolish those rigths. In fact, many cases that the grand-parents play a key role in shaping the children's intelligence and raising their morale. It is widely known that the best source of information is the elderly, they have live thoroughly from the past era at which time country had emerged from the horror of war to modern day, long enough so that they enrich in experience and pass the stories down to their offspring. Hence, if the child is close to their grand-parents, he is highly likely to have wide acknowledgement. By and large, it is crucial to let the elderly be with their descendants.
On another hand, some people would ask for community help to take care of their aging parents. Perhaps, it roots to the fact that manifold aging people tend to be weak and constantly interupt their family member's work tasks, maybe, with some diseases such as polio or metal illness. As a result, the family wants to send their old parents to other places so they could get rid of the burden caused by the erderly's disabilities. However, thinking about how tough and sacrificed they have been for a long period of time to make money in order to raise their children so finally ending up in a strange place is not what they deserve. If people find taking care of their parents bothered, they can hire a nanny or a maid to deal with that instead of sending the elderly away. But at the same time, the adults should also spend time on their parents to express gratefulness and appretiation to them, i believe. To sum up, the elderly should be taken care at home by their family and they are not worth to be sent somewhere else.
In conclusion, people should embrace their aging parents attentively as the way they are raised by their parents. No matter how frustrated people are at bathing or feeding the elderly, they should give respect to their parents and repay for what they have received when they were little.
- Many people had been involved in sports as children, but don’t do any physical exercise as adults. What are the reasons people avoid physical exercise? How to overcome this trend and motivate to be more physically active? 78
- Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places? 77
- Some people say that E- books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree. 84
- Many people had been involved in sports as children but don t do any physical exercise as adults What are the reasons people avoid physical exercise How to overcome this trend and motivate to be more physically active 72
- Some people say that all young people should have full time education until they are 18 years old To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 504, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...nd sacrificed they have been for a long period of time to make money in order to raise their c...
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Line 5, column 896, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... gratefulness and appretiation to them, i believe. To sum up, the elderly should ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, however, if, look, may, so, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, by and large, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2091.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 449.0 315.596192385 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6570155902 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46721952543 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530066815145 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.9 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6148818478 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.166666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9444444444 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374012181943 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125377152645 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573034434256 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248698341809 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508620413318 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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