Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society.
To what extent do you agree with this view?
Sweet items are not neglected by anyone, where adding excessive sugar has adverse effect in health. While some people think it is government task to campaign on this, other do specify that individuals should have their own responsibility on the same.
Firstly, will impart the government activities taken on controlling the sugar consumption by promoting and helping the agriculturist and small farmers to provide original tastes of sugar from the organic products like sugarcane and insects (bee) to give brown sugar and honey. Advertisement pamphlets were disturbed to emphasis the need of individual health and to avoid diabetic. Besides, government hospitals were also arranged with free advisor who advices and encourages us to maintain our fitness and personal hygiene.
On the other hand, generally it is human responsibility to thrive himself to be healthy and making convince on his own to reduce the level of sugar intake. Moreover, organic products is recommended instead of chemicals mixed white sugar that is available in shops. excessive usage of sugar will result in many diseases such as high blood pressure, weight gain, heart problem and various issues related to diabetics. For instance, everyone is different and based on their hereditary too, the consumption of sugar might be increase in nature that leads to health issues.
To conclude, although government should take initiative to control excessive usage of sugar, according to my opinion it is the sole responsibility of individual to take care of themselves by restricting from more consumption of sugar and taking precautions for any negative consequences, if any, that is already identified.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50957854406 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93589610081 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63601532567 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.607435869 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.8 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0346029235365 0.244688304435 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0160100592254 0.084324248473 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287506093179 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0253613735274 0.151304729494 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292151586584 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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