Some parents believe that child should not waste time by reading entertainment books but instead they should spend time to read educational books only. What is you opinion about this?

Parenting has become a monumental task with the advent of entertainment in books. A growing number of parents completely refrain their children from reading entertainment books and insist only on academic books, which we will discuss here.

Over the centuries, educational books aids learning process of children. They offer a high quality of knowledge, as those books are being developed by pedagogical experts. Academic books primarily target on enhancing the subject knowledge of students by sifting information and delivering facts. For instance, educational books helps children to gain familiarity on specific subjects, which could potentially lead them to choose the career they are most interested in, in the future. Moreover, parents siding this argument opine that, entertainment books could mislead their pupils.

On the other hand, when it comes to creative thinking and socializing, entertainment books play a major role. Comics, novels and magazines greatly helps a child to develop life skills.On top of that, literary and self-help books extensively nourishes children's character and guides them to behave well in the society. Furthermore, the innovative and unique ideologies developed in wards' minds feeds water to nurture their professional career, provided they are under the supervision of their parents.

In conclusion, while it is no denying that academic books are crucial for children's knowledge, social and soft skills can be sowed into their minds only through entertainment books, provided, they offer valuable information and not just leisure materials.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand, on top of that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71729957806 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9199348778 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658227848101 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2321045914 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.181818182 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5454545455 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205711335622 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0825689990384 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344533817218 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121650617113 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473583693116 0.056905535591 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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