Toys are part of everybody's childhood. Parents shower their love by purchasing different kind of toys to their children. By doing this they also intend to improve the development of their child. There are variety of toys available in the market like, blocks, rattles board games, puzzles, video games, audio visual books etc.
Toys are primary source of entertainment for children. They love playing with toys. Parents buy different types of toys at different ages of a child. Infants are normally given blocks and rattles etc. These kind of toys helps them identify sound and objects. Children who are more than an year old are generally given audio-visual books like alphabet books, fruit books etc which help them to learn about different letters, words in turn helping them in improving their learning skills and boosting their memory. Children in their growing age are also fond of toys like football, cricket bat etc which also serve as a medium for exercise. Toys like video games improve hand-eye coordination as compared to any other toy.
Tough there are some disadvantages as well. At times children become addicted to toys which affects their studies. Playing to much of video games can affect eye sight of children. At social level, It can create inferiority complex if a child is given lot of toys as compared to other children.
- Parents and teachers make many rules for children to encourage good behaviour and protect them danger However children would benefit from fewer rules and greater freedom To what extend do you agree or disagree 84
- You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost. 75
- Parents and teachers make many rules for children to encourage good behaviour and protect them danger. However, children would benefit from fewer rules and greater freedom.To what extend do you agree or disagree ? 67
- What do you think the government in your country should do to make your country more successful Place your views in no less than 250 words 68
- You read an advertisement from local newspaper about a discount sale at a particular shop. However, when you went to buy the goods you wanted, you found the sale had ended. 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
... normally given blocks and rattles etc. These kind of toys helps them identify sound and o...
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Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...nd objects. Children who are more than an year old are generally given audio-visu...
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Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...ys which affects their studies. Playing to much of video games can affect eye sigh...
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Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
...aying to much of video games can affect eye sight of children. At social level, It can cr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03125 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44123781307 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589285714286 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4347436701 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4375 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6875 7.06120827912 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298611838691 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111467493083 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571826449102 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214379956063 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0122629759667 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => The average readability is low. Need to improve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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