some people are happy to spend their whole life living in the same area. Others prefer to live in many different places in their lifetime. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
While nowadays people have an option to live in different areas during their life, some prefer to stay at the same place their entire life. However, both practices have advantages and disadvantages, which will be discussed in the following.
Advocates of living in different areas often mention the extent of experience of a person by living in different places during their life; since each place has its unique features, such as different food, culture, or tourist attractions, and one could live these experiences by changing location occasionally. Furthermore, they claim one would have more opportunities if they change their location during their life. This is because the overall economy of each area might fluctuate during times, and by not restricting to a place, one could pursue better opportunities elsewhere; immigration of people from third world countries such as Canada or Australia, is a great example to illustrate economic reasons behind changing place.
However, some people still prefer to live in the same place, since it is more convenient. They argue that one would be familiar with all detail of a location to fulfill their needs, without the constant need to search in the new environment; While the travelers should constantly get information, such as health systems or groceries, regarding new places. Moreover, they also claim that changing the location has adverse affect on the person's relationship. Not only one would lose his connection with friends, but also, they could not have a close relationship with their family.
Overall, although living in one area is more convenient and comfortable, I personally prefer to change my place during my life, since its advantages outweigh its difficulties.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, third, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3503649635 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85555431053 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569343065693 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.1525689571 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.6 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304318033766 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135682555306 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120583964999 0.0667982634062 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207659570555 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0956254730819 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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