Some people are happy to stay in the same area for their whole life, while others prefer living in many different places.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Staying at the same place gives us a stable and consistent life, that is why some people tend to stay at same place whereas living at unsimilar places, not only challenges us but also provides us the opportunity to broaden our horizons. I concur with second view, which I will elaborate in detail in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, If an individual stays at one place for a lifetime,then it becomes beneficial for those in terms of health and energy because a person has vast knowledge about their area and has became aware about all kind of erratic weather conditions. That is why, it is fruitful to be prepared in an advance. For example, Canada has quite cold weather, so if anyone lives there for many years then he would be well aware for all kind of food needs and outfit requirements. In addition to this, it becomes helpful to get longevity despite all harsh weather.
On the other side, the more places a person change, the more knowledge he gets in terms of different culture and tradition, which makes a person broad-minded and well civilized. If a person had not been faced any hindrances, he would not have got a chances to shape themselves. For instance, an army officer who keeps changing his residence again and again, that is why, we find them most disciplined and organized. Ultimately, whole different weather and culture give more energy to make ourselves best than others.
In my opinion, a person cannot enjoy his life, unless he does not challenge himself in every sphere of life, otherwise, your life becomes mundane and tedious at some level.
In conclusion, although same place gives us longevity, it is necessary to have fun in life with some inclement weather or irregular day schedules. That is why, I agree with second notion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, then, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82679738562 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63187162666 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604575163399 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3100664315 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.615384615 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5384615385 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268842518002 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708633968647 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638639240203 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131933602585 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363651005799 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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