some people argue that the fittest strongest individual ans teams can achieve the greatest success in sports. do you agree or disagree?
physical endurance has its imperative role in the field of sports. It is usually stated that a strengthen personality can achieve desired prosperity rather that any other quality in a playful activities. I accord that along with superior physic there is an equal role of mental training to win a game.
It is irrefutable that fitness is an important part of training program to excel any sport. If a sportsman achieves demanded physic for any game than he gets various benefits in dominating among team members. For instance, James a renowned footballer has been gifted with tall height and good strength, hence, he gets benefit to move with efficient speed during the game. In short, appearance do get a prominent level for attaining success in sports.
However, there are several other measures which play a huge role in conquering a game these are mental attitude towards desired goals as well as sportsmanship. These are some factors which equally stand with the level of fitness in a team. It can be explained simply as, some teams which lack sportsmanship or positive attitude do not seek for trophies of conquer-ship as they are more driven towards individuality consciousness. the epitome of positive attitude is famous player Sachin tendulkar who has been criticized by international players for his short height but then also he has managed to rule the hearts of his audiences and rules the world of cricket.
To summarize, I believe that every sports needs various measures to gain success. solely physical fitness and strength cannot win the game, also, same goes for other requirements such as intellectual abilities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, then, well, for instance, in short, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11940298507 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81421462672 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626865671642 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4522579636 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.538461538 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6153846154 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134376108659 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051049274866 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460179645625 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0738604982528 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281496480157 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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