Some people believe that advertisement have a useful function for TV viewers while others disagree.
What is your opinion.
TV commercials have always been the conflicting topic, and has polarized people of all generations, where some finds it intriguing while for others it seems to be distasteful. Although, sometimes these kinds of marketing techniques seems to be disturbing, this essays believes television commercials proves out to be profitable and provide a platform to present the products or governmental schemes.
On the one hand, breaks in between the interesting contents seems to make the viewers loose interest. This is because short breaks could disconnect the audience from the movies or news, making it cumbersome to logically connect to the show. Besides, it also shrinks the overall length of the serials per episode and stretches the overall run-time of movies telecasted. For example, a recent survey suggests, a typical daily opera soap has more commercials than actual scenes. However, I completely disagree with this notion, as these commercials are revenue generators and the backbone of media industry.
On the other hand, these commercials have their own benefits, firstly, it helps the producers to generate revenue out of it, however, the media channels are solely profit-making bodies, and advertisements helps them make profit. Secondly, these commercials gives the government a platform, besides the news industry, to advertise their schemes to the masses. To illustrate, India, which is a developing country, awareness of aids were spread among the masses through these commercials and helped the nation to fight this deadly disease up to a certain extent. Nevertheless, I believe such platform helps every section of the society in their respective way.
To conclude, although tv commercials are distracting for some, while others finds it beneficial. In my opinion, tv commercial helps the media houses monitory wise and also provide the authorities to connect with their citizens.
- Some people think the only purpose to work hard is to earn money To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion 90
- Nowadays children spend more time playing computer games than doing sports. Why is it happening?Does it have a positive or negative affect on their development? 89
- Some people say that E- books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree. 89
- It is argued that governments should levy a tariff on junk food because the number of health risks associated with consuming this kind of food is on the rise. This essay agrees that a higher rate of tax should be paid by fast food companies. Firstly, this 67
- Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st Century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 401, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t the products or governmental schemes. On the one hand, breaks in between the i...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50170648464 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94930314344 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607508532423 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8923762324 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165535777414 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604397763785 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788160250019 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111956822651 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668192555077 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.