Some people believe that the best way o learning about life is by listening to the advice of family and friends. Other people believe that the best way of learning about life is through personal experience. Compare the advantages of these two different ways of learning about life. Which do you think is preferable. Use a specific example to support your preference.
A few people believe that practical knowledge is the most important factor to lead a better life in society. At the same time, people can take suggestions from their elders and friends. This essay will explain the benefit of acquiring knowledge through personal experience and to pay attention to family and companions.
Firstly, the practical knowledge will make a man perfect no doubt about that. As a result, the person can self-confident, courageous and they can good decision makers in society as well as their own areas. For example, our Prime minister Jawaharlal Nehru was India's Nationalist leader who established parliamentary government and became noted for he neutralizes policies in foreign affairs.
Secondly, practical experience can be used for motivating society. For example, the usage of fuel, as a result, the environment pollution. The enormous usage of petrol will lead to health issues like the smoke may lead to lung cancer and we may not get the same in the future. An awareness programme can conduct by explaining the personal experience to cut the usage of fuel so that environmental pollution can be controlled.
Thirdly, listening to the advice from friends and family, the benefit of this is we can get different views about the same situation and the best can be chosen out of this. For example, opting for higher studies, for selecting the course we may in a confusing situation. At this point, we can approach friends. They can share different views about the course. Family support is always required for each individual's life especially in the teenage. This is the age we may confuse with decisions. This situation parents are our advisers to take a good path in our life.
In conclusion, I believe that our personal experience is an added advantage to each person to lead their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 404, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ily support is always required for each individuals life especially in the teenage. This is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04304635762 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81491427573 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53642384106 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7176354928 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6111111111 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154192903498 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512906950611 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533012181607 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996203461209 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676013560224 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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