Some people believe that capital punishment should not be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes.
Nowadays, humanity and their way of life have changed a lot compared with previous years. But, in fact, there are still a lot of crime and even murders. So many people sure that death penalty is a good way to punish the criminal. Whilst others prefer to believe that our world can change and this method should not be used. I would say that ,undoubtedly, there are many terrible and violent people who deserve to be punish, but not to be killed.
Our modern world is full of danger and craziness. There are many psychologically unhealthy humans who enjoy killing or torture helpless and those who are weaker.Moreover, today there are many youth who still stuff from people who are richer and more successful because they had just started their life journey and do not have enough money to contain themselves. We cannot judge such criminals only due to they stole something or killed someone. Because we do not know what was happening in this person's mind when he committed this crime.
On the other hand, there are a myriad of offenders who has killed dozens of women, men and even children deliberately. For instance, a serial killer Ted Bandy who has killed about 40 American young women, as experts said. He was a very handsome and gentle man but at the same time cruel, evil and horrible. When police caught him, he was acting like a normal and cute man who did not look like a murderer. Because of his actions more than 30 girls has died. And there were decided to hung him.
In conclusion, I would say that we all era different and I cannot say for all because as there are kind and gentle people who did not wanted to commit a crime, there also very violent and cautious criminals such as Ted Bandy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 341, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hod should not be used. I would say that ,undoubtedly, there are many terrible and...
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Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...rture helpless and those who are weaker.Moreover, today there are many youth who still s...
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Line 3, column 188, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun youth seems to be countable; consider using: 'many youths'.
Suggestion: many youths
...ho are weaker.Moreover, today there are many youth who still stuff from people who are ric...
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Line 3, column 446, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...they stole something or killed someone. Because we do not know what was happening in th...
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Line 5, column 32, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'myriads'?
Suggestion: myriads
...rime. On the other hand, there are a myriad of offenders who has killed dozens of w...
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Line 5, column 407, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e man who did not look like a murderer. Because of his actions more than 30 girls has d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57142857143 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37593134485 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584415584416 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3127031102 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138872930057 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438720807218 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671958372343 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875039681034 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0911254754529 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.