Some people believe that the charity organizations should give aid to those greatest need, wherever they live. Some people believe that the charity organizations should concentrate on helping people in own country instead. Discuss both views and give you opinion
IN THIS DAY AND AGE, AN ESSENTIAL ROLE MANY CHARITABLE AND HUMANTARIAN ORGANIZATIONS PLAY OVER IMPROVING THE CONDITIONS IN OTHER COUNTRY. HOWEVER, MANY PEOPLE HOLD THE VIEW THAT THIS ORGANIZATIONS SHOULD BE CONCENTRATE ON THEIR HOMELAND. FROM MY PERSPECTIVE, I SUBCRIBE WITH THE FISRT SATEMENT.
ON THE ONE HAND, THOSE WHO BELIEVE THE VIEW THAT CHARITY FUNDATIONS SHOULD BE SPENT THEIR OWN DEWLLER. ONE IS THAT THEIR RESIDENTS PAY TAX. TO ASSIST LOW-INCOME PEOPLE, CHARITY SECTORS ARE BETTER DONATED MONEY, PAID BY THEIR OWN RESIDENT TO THE NATIVE PEOPLE WHO HAVE GREATEST NEED THAN THE FOREIGNERS DUE TO PAYING TAX AND HAVING THE PRIORITY TO OTHER NATIONS. ANOTHER REASON BEHIND IT ISTHAT THIS CAN POSSITIVELY AFFECT TO DECLINE THE RATIO OF CRIMES. IN FACT, THE MORE THE POOR PEOPLE SUPPOTED FINANCIALLY, THE LESS THEY COMMIT CRIMES. FOR EXAMPLE, NON-GOVERNMENT SECTORS RAISE THE FUND TO SUPPORT THE SLUM IN MANY PLACE IN VIETNAM, THIS RESULTS IN THE PROPORTION IN THERE SIGNIFICANTLY DECREASE.
ON THE OTHER HAND, THE REST BELIEVE THAT THIS ORGANIZATIONS MUST BE SPREAD IN OTHER COUNTRY. CLEARLY, WE ARE ALL THE HUMANS BEINGS, LIVE TOGETHER IN THE EARTH AND ALL CREATE BY GOD. THEREFORE, HELPING SHOULD NOT BE DONE IN THE SPECIFIC COUMMUNITY OR NATIONS. FOR INSTANCE, AS A EBOLA VIRUS, THE FATALLY VIRUS IN THE AFRICA, THREATED THE LIVE OF HUMAN, ALL SECTORS PAID THOUSANDS OF MILIONS TO DEAL WITH THIS DEADLY DISEASE. BESIDES, THIS SECTORS CAN PROPAGATED THE MORALITY AND EMPATHY TO PEOPLE ALL OVER THE WORLD.
IN SHORT, I STRONGLY BEIEVE THAT THE CHARITABLE ORGANIZATIONS SHOULD BE TAKEN PLACE INSIDE AND OUTSIDE THEIR COUNTRY BY THE WISE AND CONSIDERATIVE WAY.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
IN THIS DAY AND AGE, AN ESSENTIAL ROLE MANY CHARITABLE AND HUMAN...
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Line 1, column 180, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...HOWEVER, MANY PEOPLE HOLD THE VIEW THAT THIS ORGANIZATIONS SHOULD BE CONCENTRATE ON ...
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Line 1, column 209, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'concentrated'?
Suggestion: Concentrated
... VIEW THAT THIS ORGANIZATIONS SHOULD BE CONCENTRATE ON THEIR HOMELAND. FROM MY PERSPECTIVE,...
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Line 2, column 263, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'HAVE the GREATEST'.
Suggestion: HAVE the GREATEST
...R OWN RESIDENT TO THE NATIVE PEOPLE WHO HAVE GREATEST NEED THAN THE FOREIGNERS DUE TO PAYING ...
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Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...N THE OTHER HAND, THE REST BELIEVE THAT THIS ORGANIZATIONS MUST BE SPREAD IN OTHER C...
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Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: HUMANS_BEINGS[2]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean: 'human BEINGS'?
Suggestion: Human BEINGS
... OTHER COUNTRY. CLEARLY, WE ARE ALL THE HUMANS BEINGS, LIVE TOGETHER IN THE EARTH AND ALL CRE...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in fact, in short, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09124087591 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73239720007 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583941605839 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2896196667 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226075651206 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714149609233 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713643617619 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129459564639 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294515685471 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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