Some people believe that children should obey their parents. Other, however, argue that they should think independently. Discuss these views and give your own opinion
Some parents, especially those who practice overly protective parenting style, believe that their offsprings must follow the directions dictated to them. However, opponents disagree with this approach. They opine that children must have the freedom to think and act independently in their daily lives and I agree with this viewpoint.
Helicopter parents think that they know the best about their children's future and young ones ought to follow their instructions obediently. Since guardians have a lot of experience under their belts, they believe that their methods are the best ones and this is the only way to do things. Although this approach has an advantage that these methods are tested and proven successful in the past, the time has dramatically changed now and past practices are not relevant anymore in modern society. For instance, arts-related carrier paths, such as acting and singing, are thriving nowadays.
On the other hand, if young ones had provided with an opportunity to think independently, they would have become self-sufficient and confident adults. For example, according to recent studies, those juveniles who were involved in the decision making from the early age of their lives later became more successful and independent individuals. Therefore, when your upbringing involves thinking critically and tackling daily issues on your own, your brain is being wired to attack problems head-on rather than waiting for the others to help.
To conclude, while some guardians want to micromanage their young ones' lives, I firmly believe that we should let children decide what is best for them by the trial and error approach. I would suggest that we should let youngsters act independently so that they can learn from their mistakes and gain confidence which is crucial for them in order to lead a successful life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30375426621 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7168821879 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61433447099 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7471290203 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265251122532 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883815153178 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056582339556 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153110864452 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130015979379 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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