Some people believe that children should spend all their free time with their families. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss the possible arguments on both sides, and say which side you personally support.
Nobody can deny that parental influence is important in life of children, and various people think that they should spend all time with their families whereas others think that it is not necessary. I believe that children should not spend all their time with family, instead their should be proper allocation of time between parents and peers.
Admittedly, there are some basic benefits of spending much time with parents as it help the children to learn about their family culture and discipline. Nowadays, cases of abduction are increasing, so if a children will stays with parent then there is no threat to safety. Another benefit is that, children will not come under the influence of outsiders, and will also not learn bad habits from them. As Child is not mature enough to decide good and bad, so requirement of foster parent or guardian is helpful to ensure their betterment.
On the contrary, children should be given a chance to spend time without parents as their are some qualities and traits, such as team skills, empathy, and negotiation which children learn from friends. Additionally, it is essential for children to be self dependent in order to lead a successful life. A child will never be able to be self dependent unless he comes out of the comfort zone of parental care. If a child is given an opportunity to involve in an activity with friends then it will enhance his creativity and imagination.
In conclusion, spending time with parents is required but spending all the time with them does not have positive impact on the Children. They should spend their time with outsiders as much as they can because it will help them to stand in good stead.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
...ases of abduction are increasing, so if a children will stays with parent then there is no...
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'stay'
Suggestion: stay
...n are increasing, so if a children will stays with parent then there is no threat to ...
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Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...chance to spend time without parents as their are some qualities and traits, such as ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, whereas, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86759581882 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52916074638 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519163763066 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0429809565 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.416666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27595296113 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115852887138 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0993597777475 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194753826546 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0914761095919 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.