Some people believe that countries should produce food that its population needs, and import food as less as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Indubitably, ensuring food adequacy for the entire citizens of a nation has always been a concern. It is often argued that a certain number of people believe that country leaders should focus on domestic food production rather than importing food products from different countries. Certainly, I firmly concur with the given notion.
Apparently, if government leaders will focus on local farming production, it holds a wide range of constructive benefits. To commence with, the fact that more a country will rely on imported food, the more food crisis it faces. Because, importing food products includes transportation costs, taxation, and other charges which eventually increase the food price. To tackle with this problem, national leaders should focus on local food production by ensuring to allocate more budgets in the domestic farming production. Apart from this, some diploma programs in farming can create more talented individuals who would involve in domestic farming production. As a result, it will be mass the production of local food items and will ensure the eradicate the problem of shortage of food in a nation.
Furthermore, government leaders should focus on farming, irrigation, and planting methods in their local farming industry. By putting focus and developing new ideas, it can increase the employment opportunities in a country. This kind of focus will withstand in growing the country's economy, especially when such kind of idea and this practice is done by developing countries. For example, in India, the farming sector created the highest number of jobs because of new farming methods which indirectly and directly include with agriculture sector. Last but not the least, when it comes to comparing the quality and freshness of food, importing food will always be not valued in such kind of comparing with two above terms. Additionally, importing food also has toxins and chemicals which could be harmful to the human body and will create health problems among the individuals living in a particular region.
In conclusion, to prevent the food crisis, ensuring a better quality of food, and decline unemployment problems could be achieved if a nation becomes self-sufficient in its food production.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, furthermore, if, so, apart from, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1897.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38920454545 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83802928017 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517045454545 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5146889438 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.5625 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228655950771 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871503086456 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710064488079 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168989892641 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050445052882 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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