The entertainment industry has hugely grown over the years, since others means of communication like YouTube or Instagram has gained more importance. Influencer has reached a prominent status and in the eyes of the public enjoy the same status once belonged to Hollywood stars. Many contemporary stars like owe their fame to the digital revolution, brought about by the companies of the Silicon Valley.
Since the dawn of time, man has thirsted for entertainment, first in the shape of dances and pictures to finally come to the invention of the movies. People love entertainment because it is a way to escape from reality, to dream and to find inspiration. It is no surprise thus, that artist play a crucial role in day to day life. Common people dram of being bold like Sylvester Stallone, as strong as Arnold Schwarzenegger or beautiful as Sharon Stone.
Just to give the reader a sense of how big is the entertainment industry, the revenue of the U.S media industry reaches roughly 700 billion dollars, including motion pictures, television programs , commercials. books and radio broadcasting.
In the wake of this figures many raise their eyebrowns, arguing that entertainers are paid too much. if we analyze the issue trough the lens of individuals plaged by poverty and misery, it is clear that the gap between the earnings of a wolrd-famous star and a working-class family seems to be gigantic. However I think that this the wrong approach to the problem.
Less tangibly but not less importantly, entertainment is something that cause relief and joy in people. It can inspires people to accomplish thier goals or to follow their passions. A movie can urge students to study harder, children to play musical instruments, lazy people to exercise and to shape their bodies. Furthermore, watching a movie, for instance, is a great opportunity to socialyze or to spend some time with the family or with friends. In short, entertainment is not only an industry, it has the potential to make life better, brighter and more interesting.
I believe, therefore, that entertainers deserve their high wages, because they are an incredible source of inspiration, motivation and encouragement people need in thier everyday life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Books
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun raise seems to be countable; consider using: 'many raises'.
Suggestion: many raises
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...king-class family seems to be gigantic. However I think that this the wrong approach to...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'inspire'
Suggestion: inspire
... cause relief and joy in people. It can inspires people to accomplish thier goals or to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, i think, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1864.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12087912088 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01716363694 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7393649516 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.555555556 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185372575873 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462527436377 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517599877411 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083369652214 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452761624448 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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