Some people believe that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them natonally.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
While some people are of the opinion that environmental issues ought to be tackled by all countries as a widespread problem, others contend that any country should deal with its own difficulties regardless to other countries’ ones. This essay will analyze both above mentioned notions prior to a reasoned conclusion illustrating the former one is more reasonable.
On one hand, some environmentalists claim that being able to solve environmental problems, all nations should cooperate with each other. In other words, they believe that these issues are closely connected to each other and without any association of all nations, any endeavor results in a failure. It is accepted that problems such as creation of a hole in the Ozone layer and the global warming issue are problems that require a wide range of efforts from all members of the global society. The Paris agreement which results from a compromise of all countries which eventually brings about an alienation in global warming, is a salient example of this assertion.
On the other hand, some people maintain that every nation should deal with its own problems due to the fact that each country is struggling with its own difficulties. Furthermore, they claim that possessing its own geographical and financial circumstance, each country ought to solve its environmental issues. Notwithstanding, it is believed that finding practical solution for these challenges is only accessible through a global cooperation; since, creating awareness in societies, funding compromised projects and using global experiences just results from a widespread cooperation between all developed and developing countries. As a prime example, the water shortage issue in arid and semi-arid countries such as those in the Middle East region can be explained. Have intervened some technologically developed countries in this challenge, they would be solved more easily.
Over all, although some experts may claim that environmental problems should be resolved domestically, it is argued that only can this done by a global team-work effort.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, so, while, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48297213622 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11383701938 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551083591331 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.1445071305 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.583333333 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9166666667 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299188611558 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109550420268 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791940647142 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191122797731 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03468273781 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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