There is currently contentious argument over whether family is being homed by very high speed and pressure of contemporary Lifestyle I totally agree with this opinion because the fast pace leads to less time for families to be together and stress leads to arguments among family members.
The main reason why I believe family life is being a composed is because families have less time to be with each other. This is due to family members being busy at work and with their social lives as well as this people have many things they have to do these days such as Checking email operating their online social status and so less.time is left for family life. To illustrate, I spend about 2 hours online every night attending to daily correspondence before chatting with my family members, whereas,2 years ago, I would spend time with my family as soon as I walked in the door.
Another reason why i support the notion that families are being impacted negatively is that the pressure of life these days means that even when families do get together arguments are more likely.This is because everyone feel tired and they are more likely to get irritated and to react to their heightened emotional life level.
In conclusion, I completely agree that the Rapid Pace and stressful nature of contemporary Lifestyle are having negative consequences on life relationships. This is because family members have less time and when they are together they feel less relaxed. Given the situtation it seem that family members should try to be more spportive to one another and also parents need to set aside regular time for families to relax together.
- "Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up." - rewrite 56
- Some people believe that the fast pace and stress of modern life is having a negative effect on families To what extent do you agree or disagree 77
- Some people believe that the fast pace and stress of modern life is having anegative effect on families.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, whereas, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88172043011 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53461538008 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534050179211 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.1495239644 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.25 106.682146367 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.875 20.7667163134 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112459329998 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640335973702 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559223248933 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075743896351 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0147748062653 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 9.78957915832 179% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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