Aging population has concerned many countries as it places burden on the national budget and medical systems. Although some people, for this reason, think retirees should be responsible for their own financial situation, I believe governmental support reflect a fair and humane society.
On the one hand, it is true that the increasing number of senior citizens, namely retired people, exacerbates the medical tension in many countries. Elderly people are often prone to illnesses, and treatments might take longer and cost more than those of young patients. As we have seen, the unfortunate victims of the Covid-19 pandemic are mostly senior members. If the governments have to settle all medical fees for those people, it will possibly leave a big hole in the national budget. Besides, many countries are unable to support elders because they have more immediate priorities over other social problems such as poverty, environmental pollution, and overpopulation. Therefore, fiscal preparedness is crucial for those who want to have a dignified life after retirement.
Pension or financial support, however, should be considered a fair compensation for the taxes and sacrifices a citizen have devoted throughout his or her working life. For example, when employees receive their monthly salary, there will always be an income tax deduction. Or when we buy something, however cheap or expensive the item is, we also have to pay sales tax, namely VAT. Furthermore, I believe a caring and humane society should not abandon anyone, let alone people who are no longer work because of their health condition. In moral terms, we are obligated to children, senior members, or those who are unable to take care of themselves properly.
Generally, financial and medical supports for retired people undoubtedly place constraints on national budget, but it is what a fair and caring society should do for its citizens.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
.... Although some people, for this reason, think retirees should be responsible for...
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Suggestion:
...ate victims of the Covid-19 pandemic are mostly senior members. If the government...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, for example, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31353135314 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81205549592 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627062706271 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8734249371 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250894483754 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781534324996 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077236693014 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16754202636 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519854711123 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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