Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situation.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
In today's cut-throat competition it is hard to get a dream job. Some people believe that one should accept the job which is not satisfactory while other think that one should put enormous efforts to get favorable conditions. I firmly agree with the later view and this essay will advocate my notion of belief.
On the one hand, the proponents who favor to accept unreliable job conditions have their own reasons. Firstly, they believe that it hard to get best job in the first attempt. Moreover, the unemployment is soaring concern for most of the nation in such situation one should accept any job and start working. Secondly, Individuals has more of family responsibilities such as paying bills, full fill needs of family members. In such conditions it is use less to waste time in thriving for dream job which may leads one to stressful life.
On the other hand, some people believe that it is person's responsibility to live contented life with meaningful and favorable job conditions. For an example, if individuals feels that despite of hard work and sufficient qualification, one is getting low wages then one should talk to management and if fails opt for different job. Moreover, some time it is essential to upgrade ourselves to get favorable job conditions. For an instance, today many people opt for online certification in their relevant field to gain promotion in order to get financial stable life. If these personal efforts are not made to improve the situation, one may find him self in stressful and poor life.
To conclude, even though, it is hard to find dream job but one should not stuck in unfavorable job conditions. To have contented job is not insurmountable problem but can be achieved with channelized efforts.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ld put enormous efforts to get favorable conditions. I firmly agree with the late...
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Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'stick'
Suggestion: stick
...rd to find dream job but one should not stuck in unfavorable job conditions. To have...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... but one should not stuck in unfavorable job conditions. To have contented job is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94217687075 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85246012438 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537414965986 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6132897247 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186865228482 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673753697107 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343524027568 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114264503899 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359433877794 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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