Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Other argues that is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Although it is thought by few that it is best for an individual to accept the poor circumstances, like having not enough money and un-satisfaction at job, others think that a person should keep trying and bring improvement in such situations. While some people accept bad situations for their best because they have no other options, however, in my opinion, I believe that people should bring improvement in such conditions as it will allow them to live a happier life.
On the one hand, some people think that the acceptance of appalling conditions, such as unsatisfactory job and shortfall of money, is better for a person because they have no other choices. As such individuals know that they have no other ways to bring improvement so keep struggling for betterment can consequently affect their both time and health. For instance, a study done by University of Oxford students that in Pakistan, approximately 40% heart patients which are admitted to hospitals in 2018 are those who were struggling for better life. Thus it is better for such persons to accept poor situations.
On the other side, many believe that a person should keep trying in order to improve poor situation, like unsatisfactory job and shortage of money in order to bring happiness and I agree. In other words, satisfaction of employment and supply of enough money allows individuals to live a stress free life so it is beneficial to work hard and bring changes in bad situations. A recent journal produced by Time Magazine for example, stated that in 2014 in China, nearly 26% people switched to new jobs for better working environment and better salaries so that they can live a better life.
In conclusion, while some people consider accepting poor conditions for their best because of no choices, however, I think individuals should keep trying to improve such circumstances for a prosperous life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 550, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...se who were struggling for better life. Thus it is better for such persons to accept...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00955414013 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88679292124 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477707006369 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.1619550061 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.3 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346677039009 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166068542524 0.084324248473 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763431191124 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234827011847 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587307906694 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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