Some people believe it is better for children to grow up in the city while others say it is better to grow up in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is very crucial things about people's mindset which decide children's future that they have to bought up in city or countryside. However, I am with the former view and I would like to share my opinions for both view in below paragraphs.
I personally believe that children grow up in the city will grow better as compared to children grow up in countryside as child living in city have lots of facilities to develop their personality. They went to prestigious schools and these schools supports lots of extra curricular activities along with education which encourages child's overall character. City child have better exposure to technology, and also aware about recent trends, face lot of competition and all these things directly or indirectly support children's growth.
Children can opt for various classes like sports academy, hobby class, music class etc. which is not available in countryside and child who live in countryside have to spend their lot of time in traveling if they need all these amenities in their life. Overall environment and behaviour of people who live in city is favorable for children's growth due to higher education and Access to technology. You can't denied that nowadays technology plays better role in children's development which is easily available in city.
However, it's not necessary that child who live in countryside will not grow up well because there are few child which are born intelligent and hard working and with the help of theirDedication and motivation they achieve better personality development even with less facilities. Countryside people are uneducated or less educated , child us not getting an appropriate environment for growth Butaccept that the number of these type of child is very less.
In short, child who live anywhere can grow but the chances are more of child who live in city because of access to various facilities, technology, highly educated society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...en grow up in the city will grow better as compared to children grow up in country...
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Line 5, column 43, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ildren can opt for various classes like sports academy, hobby class, music class etc. ...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...education and Access to technology. You cant denied that nowadays technology plays b...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun child seems to be countable; consider using: 'few children'.
Suggestion: few children
...will not grow up well because there are few child which are born intelligent and hard wor...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'children'?
Suggestion: children
... not grow up well because there are few child which are born intelligent and hard wor...
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Line 7, column 263, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun facilities is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...etter personality development even with less facilities. Countryside people are uned...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e people are uneducated or less educated , child us not getting an appropriate en...
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1858974359 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79126100769 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522435897436 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.3784995776 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.833333333 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247829712063 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10005955404 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0971538361318 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145305696043 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737702865273 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.